What’s a kidney worth?

A reader, Jen Rhee, sent me this graphic illustrating the worth of various body parts, and it’s intriguing, although I have no direct knowledge of its accuracy. 

Life and disability insurers calculate the worth of certain recurrent injuries. In the olden days, work comp funds published guidelines. Here’s one chart and a CNBC slide show. “Key man” insurance on actors, singers, and dancers may feature in your story — Betty Grable’s legs were insured for $1 million. Time Magazine reports on “Top 10 Oddly Insured Body Parts.”

$600,000 for Dolly Parton’s breasts and $6 million for Bruce Springsteen’s voice?

Ok, I get that.

But a few others will raise your eyebrows–no matter how much you’ve insured them for.

(Graphic: Jen Rhee.)

National Missing Children’s Day — Dr. Betty Kuffel on stopping child abductions

My friend Betty Kuffel, MD is author of Eyes of a Pedophile: Detecting Child Predators. Her book is available free from Amazon Kindle for 24 hours on May 25th in commemoration of Take 25 Day, a day when parents are urged to take 25 minutes to talk with their children about safe behavior and avoiding abduction.

Get the download at Betty’s website

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Convicted pedophile Jose Antonio Ramos remained the primary suspect in the disappearance of Etan Patz for three decades until last month when investigators reopened the case. The new search focused in the basement of a building near Etan’s home where a handyman neighbor worked. Suspect Othniel Miller denies involvement but was reportedly seen with Etan the night before his abduction.

Now, NY investigators are focused on Pedro Hernandez. Details have not been released but the man was taken into custody on Wednesday, May 23. Hernandez was interviewed as a suspect in the past. This may be the break in this case we have been waiting for.

The morning Etan disappeared he left his home in lower Manhattan, NY, to walk alone two blocks to a school bus stop. The extensive local investigation, coupled with widely distributed photos of Etan, triggered the missing children’s movement of today. The National Center for Missing and Exploited Children (NCMEC) estimates 2,000 children per day are reported missing. Many are located unharmed, but like Etan some are never found and unfortunately, the latest search produced no new evidence.

In 2007, the NCMEC joined with other organizations across the US to raise awareness for child safety and keep kids safer through education. In their Take 25 campaign, they encourage parents and guardians to take twenty-five minutes on May 25 to talk to children about safe behavior and how to avoid abduction. National Missing Children’s Day has been observed annually on May 25 since 1983 in  commemmoration of the day in 1979 when six-year-old Etan Patz disappeared.

From the tragedy of Etan’s and other high profile cases of child abduction many improvements in safety, education, prosecution and ways to rapidly locate missing children have occurred. The Code Adam alert was devised after the 6-year-old son of John Walsh (host of America’s Most Wanted) was abducted from a department store in Florida and later found murdered. First started in Walmart stores, this rapid response mechanism is designed to stop a child abduction in progress. Now broadly used in malls and public buildings, if a child is reported missing, a Code Adam alert results in an immediate lock-down.

In the aftermath of two other child abductions, Jacob Wetterling and Megan Kanka, the tireless work of their parents stimulated the US Congress to pass a law mandating registration of sex offenders to alert neighbors about their residential locations.

Statistics show finding an abducted child quickly is prime for a safe return. Over 500 children have been recovered since the development of the AMBER Alert system. Named for Amber Hagerman, a nine-year-old abducted and murdered Texas girl, this alert results in rapid dissemination of information about missing children. Call 9-1-1 if you witness an abduction. Describe the child, perpetrator, incident, location, vehicle and license number. If the missing child is thought to be in imminent danger, law enforcement issues the Amber Alert which interrupts radio and television broadcasts with details. Electronic billboards along highways, the Internet and smart phones flash the information.

In cooperation with local agencies, ten FBI Child Abduction Rapid Deployment (CARD) Teams are on alert. Covering five regions, the experienced personnel provide resource support and investigative tools including electronic mapping to identify and locate known sex offenders residing near the abduction location. Partnership of the public with law enforcement is essential for interactive systems to work. But educating caregivers and children to take action to avoid abduction is also key. There are many safety tips at the NCMEC www.take25.org website.

Talk to your children about safety on May 25th. Try using discussion scenarios like “What if…What would you do?” Walk through the neighborhood with your kids and show them safe homes to seek refuge in an emergency. Teach crowd safety. Point out situations of potential danger. Tell your kids to avoid traveling alone and if grabbed, scream, kick and try to escape.

May 25th is a reminder day for what caregivers should do all year long to keep children safer. Like the FBI CARD Team, check online at www.sexoffenders.com and learn addresses of convicted sex offenders near you, particularly the more violent Level 3 offenders. One may be living next door.

Sandra Day O’Connor & civics

I’m a big fan of former Supreme Court Justice Sandra Day O’Connor. Big fan. 

And since the mission of Books, Crooks & Counselors and this blog is to help writers and readers understand the legal system a little better, I suggest you take a quick look at this Washington Post article and interview with the Justice, titled Former Supreme Court Justice Sandra Day O’Connor on the importance of civics education.  The Post describes a period of “civics lethargy,” and links to a national study demonstrating what I think is pretty obvious: as a whole, citizens just don’t know a lot about how our country works. To help change that, Justice O’Connor founded iCivics in 2009, an online program that provides free lesson plans and games for learning civics, which the Post reports is used in all 50 states and 55,000 classrooms.

I took a look at iCivics, and it’s kinda fun! Please pass the word to teachers and parents.

 

 

 

Don’t forget to bid — Brenda Novak’s Auction for Diabetes Research

NY Times bestselling author Brenda Novak’s Annual Online Auction for Diabetes Research continues. More items have been added, and the bidding is hot! Literally hundreds of items for readers and writers are available, including a signed copy of Books, Crooks & Counselors, the 2011 Agatha Award winner for Best Nonfiction, and two hours of legal research for a manuscript or two hours of manuscript review by the author of said Agatha winner, aka me.

That last is currently going for a bargain price, so get on over and bid ‘er up!

 

Dr. Betty Kuffel discusses pedophiles

My friend Dr. Betty Kuffel was interviewed last week on Montana Public Radio about her book, Eyes of a Pedophile.  Right click on this link. Then click on “Open Link in New Window.” It will open as a download audio clip.

 

Betty writes from her long experience as an emergency room doctor, and from her extensive interviews with one of Montana’s most infamous pedophiles. Her book includes advice on identifying child predators and protecting children from them.

BONI-HR — The Breakout Novel Intensive Workshop

Last week, I went to Hood River, Oregon, about 60 miles east of Portland where the Hood meets the Columbia, for the BreakOut Novel Intensive workshop.

“Intensive” is the operative word.

For a full week, I lived and breathed fiction writing. Thirty-two students from across the US and Canada met Monday evening, eager and a little nervous. We parted the next Sunday afternoon, tired, happy, and much, much more aware of what make stories succeed. Along with the dirty clothes in our bags, we took home tools and determination.

Did I mention it was intense?

BONI is sponsored by Free Expressions, a seminar and editing firm run by Lorin Oberweger. But the firepower comes from Don Maass, literary agent, writer, and teacher. Don teaches a three-hour class every morning and a couple of evenings. Lorin and Jason Sitzes teach an evening scene class. Every afternoon, we wrote, using exercises Don gave us in class. Each student has individual sessions with Don, Lorin, and three other instructors–and each offers something  different. Jason, for example, who also runs the Writers Retreat Workshop, spent half an hour brainstorming with me on how to redirect a couple of plot threads gone wrong.

The hotel–the very comfortable Hood River Inn–sits above the river, and a walking path leads to a nearby park and marina. It also leads into the village of Hood River, a delightful historic town revitalized in recent years by recreation–sailing, wind surfing, winery-hopping. The village has several fun wine bars, cute galleries, and boutiques. And tons of coffee shops and three bookstores. It is the northwest, after all.

So, what did we learn? Don’s books, The Breakout Novel and The Fire in Fiction, are crammed with great analysis, exercises, and examples. But the class brings them to life.

One assignment was to bring a flat scene to life using the techniques we’d learned that morning: focusing on the protagonist’s goals and what frustrates them by identifying and showing internal and external turning points, using externalization to show the protag’s emotions and stir things up, identifying the mood of the scene and shifting it, then showing the effect on her, and rewriting dialogue

It took me most of the afternoon to rewrite a 2-1/2 page scene into 2 pages, by adding about twelve lines.

Ok, math isn’t my strong suit.

But that was Friday, and I was also using techniques we’d studied earlier in the week in pursuit of my overarching goal of redefining Erin, my protagonist: rethinking every line, thought and image, asking “does that convey what I want?,” “is that still part of the story,” and “is it still true?”

Intense. And worth every minute. If you get the chance to go–no: make the chance. BONI is offered twice a year, in Hood River and Orlando. Lorin and her excellent crew also offer other workshops, with the amazing Mr. Maass and other instructors.

Go. Your stories will never be the same again.

Taking the Mystery Out of Writing — A Therapist’s View

Struggling with your story or your screenplay? Not sure you know how to develop a credible motive or build a suspenseful plot? Dennis Palumbo, who became a therapist after a career as a screenwriter and now writes mysteries, writes a regular column, Hollywood on the Couch, for Psychology Today’s online edition. In Taking the Mystery Out of Writing Mysteries, he says the answer lies in the characters–and gives good, practical advice for solving the mystery of writing a mystery.

Dennis’s book Fever Dream (Poisoned Pen Press), second in a series featuring psychologist Daniel Rinaldi, a trauma expert who consults with the Pittsburgh Police, has just been released. For more, visit his website.

 

Thanks, Dennis!

Eyes of a Pedophile — a great reference

My friend and sister-member of the Authors of the Flathead Betty Kuffel has just published a new book, Eyes of a Pedophile: Detecting Child Predators.

Betty is a medical doctor who worked for many years in trauma and emergency medicine.  That work regularly brought her into contact with crime victims–and ultimately gave her unparalleled access to Nathan Bar-Jonah, a notorious child predator who most likely was also a killer and a cannibal. Betty uses her personal interviews with Bar-Jonah, local law enforcement, and other witnesses, along with medical records and legal transcripts, and her research into pedophilia–that is, predatory child sex abuse. Her book is an excellent reference for writers as well as for parents, teachers, and other readers who want to know more about the Bar-Jonah case, but even more importantly, how to identify pedophilic behavior and protect children. Her blog includes several chilling audio clips of Bar-Jonah himself.

Eyes of a Pedophile is available for the Kindle.

Jane Friedman on securing permissions

Although I don’t advise writers on contract and copyright issues, I do hear lots of questions about permissions and fair use — and some of them may be answered today on Jane Friedman’s blog, in her post When Do You Need to Secure Permission?

Jane’s blog is a consistently excellent source of advice on many issues for writers, especially on changes in the publishing industry.

Psychologist Carolyn Kaufman on the Insanity Defense

Today, psychologist Carolyn Kaufman, author of The Writer’s Guide to Psychology (Quill Driver Books, 2010), and I trade perspectives on the insanity defense. You can read my post on the legal issues of insanity on the Query  Tracker blog .

Psychological Disorders and the Insanity Defense

When people hear the word “insanity,” most assume they’re talking about a psychological term (or maybe even a psychological diagnosis). In fact, insanity is a legal term, which means that a courtroom is the only place that a person can be declared insane. However, psychologists and psychiatrists can help determine whether someone has a psychological condition that will let the defense argue that the defendant should be declared “not guilty by reason of insanity” (NGRI).

So what does it mean to be NGRI? “Currently,” writes Leslie Budewitz in Books, Crooks, and Counselors, “in federal cases, the defendant must prove that he has a ‘severe’ mental disease that made him ‘unable to appreciate the nature and quality or the wrongfulness of his acts.’” In other words, the individual must be so psychologically disturbed that she or he (we’ll use he for the sake of simplicity in this post) was not able to understand at the time he was committing the crime that what he was doing was wrong.

In psychological terms, that usually means the individual was psychotic. Psychosis means that someone has lost touch with reality the way most people experience it. The two most common symptoms of psychosis (though both do not need to be present for psychosis to be diagnosed) are hallucinations and delusions. Writers often use the terms “hallucination” and “delusion” interchangeably, but they are not synonymous.

Hallucinations are sensory experiences in the absence of sensory stimuli. In other words, the person is seeing, hearing, feeling, smelling, or tasting something that isn’t there. Someone who is hearing voices, for example, would be said to be hallucinating.

Delusions are problematic beliefs that are not based in reality and which cannot be shaken with logic. The belief that one’s thoughts are being stolen and recorded by, say, the FBI or aliens is delusional.

The disorder most often associated with psychosis is schizophrenia. (Note: Schizophrenia is not the same thing as dissociative identity disorder, sometimes called multiple personality disorder. People with schizophrenia only have one personality.) In addition to hallucinations and delusions, some people with schizophrenia experience disorganized thoughts, speech, and behavior. That doesn’t mean they’re messy people—it means their behavior is odd, even bizarre. Words and phrases may be jumbled together in a nonsensical fashion. Though the media is usually quick to look for schizophrenia in people responsible for mass shootings, Jared Lee Loughner, the man who opened fire in Tucson in January 2011, is one of the few who clearly does have schizophrenia.

Bipolar disorder, once called manic depression, can also cause hallucinations and delusions, usually in the manic phase. There is also a small handful of other psychotic disorders. These include delusional disorders, in which someone has delusions but no other symptoms of a disorder like schizophrenia or bipolar disorder.

If you decide to portray a psychotic disorder, be aware that although symptoms for disorders like schizophrenia and bipolar disorder can worsen at times due to, say, stress, they should not just appear and disappear when it is most convenient for the author. Psychotic disorders and bipolar disorder are severe, life-changing problems that generally require medication (antipsychotics for psychotic disorders and, in the case of bipolar disorder, mood stabilizers) as well as therapy to learn to manage the disorder.

One diagnosis that will not earn your character a NGRI determination is psychopathy, in which the individual knows exactly what he’s doing and that it’s wrong—he just doesn’t care. A psychopath is stone-cold sane. Because there is no entry for “psychopathy” in the current version of the psychological diagnostic manual (DSM-IV-TR), people who violate others’ rights and break laws with this lack of conscience are diagnosed with antisocial personality disorder (APD). Not because they withdraw from society or isolate themselves (they don’t), but because they are anti-society. They flagrantly violate others’ rights and cause problems for society.

Only the very worst cases of APD qualify as true psychopathy. Psychopaths are whimsical, reckless, callous, cold, and cruel. They are your serial killers. (Serial killers are rarely psychotic, because psychotic people are not able to be organized and deliberate enough to hide their crimes long term.) If they’re charismatic and intelligent, they might also become CEOs, politicians, or other people of power and influence. (For more on this topic, check out Paul Babiak and Robert Hare’s book Snakes in Suits: When Psychopaths Go to Work .)

True psychopaths are thought by experts like Robert Hare to be born the way they are. They are your proverbial “bad seeds.” (For more information on how the brains of psychopaths are different from those of other people, check out The Writer’s Guide to Psychology! ) If you want to see the difference between someone who’s psychotic and someone who’s psychopathic, compare John Nash in A Beautiful Mind (schizophrenia, though far from a perfect portrayal of it) to Hannibal Lecter in Silence of the Lambs (psychopathy).

I mentioned dissociative identity disorder (DID) earlier, and though there have been historical cases of people being declared NGBI due to DID, that is much more unlikely in a modern environment. Why? First, because people with DID are not psychotic. Add to that the fact that DID is one of the most—if not the most—controversial diagnosis in psychology. There is strong evidence that, at least in some cases, the disorder is “iatrogenic,” which means it has been created by the therapist in a suggestible individual. The famous case of Sybil, for example, was iatrogenic, created by a therapist interested in fame. (For more information, check out Debbie Nathan’s book Sybil Exposed .)

To summarize, only in a courtroom can it be decided whether someone is legally sane or insane—but a psychologist or psychiatrist may be asked whether a defendant is (and/or was at the time of the crime) psychotic to determine whether he should be declared NGRI.

Finally, as Leslie Budewitz mentions in Books, Crooks, and Counselors, NGRI is not—contrary to popular belief—a plea that is often used successfully in court: “Justice Department statistics say the defense is raised in only about 1 percent of cases, and succeeds in only 25 percent of those.” It is also not a Get Out of Jail Free card. In fact, on average, a person declared NGRI spends more time in a psychiatric facility than he might have spent in jail.

Carolyn Kaufman, PsyD, is the author of The Writer’s Guide to Psychology: How to Write Accurately About Psychological Disorders, Clinical Treatment and Human Behavior  (Quill Driver Books, 2010) which helps writers avoid common misconceptions and inaccuracies and “get the psych right” in their stories. She also blogs for Psychology Today and the QueryTracker Blog .

Thanks, Carolyn!